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I received positive feedback from Me. Bobet because he is my main man and always commenting positive things on the posts.
I tried to paint more of an image of a specific situation that a person might be able to relate to, and use imagery.
Hey Isaiah,
ReplyDeleteI think you really dove into more detail with the pitch, and I was definitely able to understand your overall scheme better. You were able to draw upon the positive feedback and better your pitch in its entirety. Great post!